Lost in The Warehouse
Personal Goal: To improve punctuation and fluency
“I’ll just be in the sports section” I said.
‘Ok’ I’ll just be in the clothes section.’’ said Mum. When I had finished looking at the sports gear I looked at the clothes section she wasn't there!!!
I didn't know what I had done to get lost in the warehouse. ‘Am I eventually going to get out of here’ I thought to myself. Well I was running across the clothes aisle but she wasn't there. I was terrified.
By that time my heart was racing. A few moments later I sprinted to the front counter
And asked if they could call my mum
So they did . Then it turned out that I didn't look hard enough. In the clothes aisle that's where they were. I guess that I didn't look hard enough.
i like it how you put a lot of information in this story about getting lost and how you solved the problem
ReplyDeleteI like how you used explanation words like 'By that time my heart was racing'. That made me hooked!
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